At First Sight

When I first saw  you ,you took my breath away 
Yea I know it sounds like such a cliché 
But I know I will never forget that day

You were sitting in a chair in a corner 
 I began to ponder
Will I ever have a chance with him? I wonder?

I know I'm not your ideal type of girl 
And there's plenty in this world 
But maybe you can give us a whirl?

Yea I know I'm living in a fantasy 
For you to have a chance with me 
I know there's no guarantee. 

My friends tell me to move on 
But I don't want to go along 
With the idea that they could be wrong. 

You could be just as shy as me 
You could be the guy for me 
So thats just what I'm trying to see. 

I'll continue to wait patiently 
For the day you notice me 
I pray to God he'll make a way for me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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J.T. Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 10:26 PM
Very nice; This poem is filled with passion - JT
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 30, 2017 at 2:26 PM
A warm welcome to Poetry Soup Violetta! My advice would be to become friends, then you never know where it might lead. I can relate to your words in this well written and enchanting poem. : )
Wilae Avatar
November 24, 2017 at 1:46 PM
Nice flow...
Lee Sr. Avatar
November 24, 2017 at 2:26 AM
Violetta, first welcome to Poetry Soup were creativity honored and welcomed. Your verse "At First Sight" is quite lovely and warm. Speaks as of a first and true love story. Great job!! --James
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