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At First Sight

When I first saw you ,you took my breath away Yea I know it sounds like such a cliché But I know I will never forget that day You were sitting in a chair in a corner I began to ponder Will I ever have a chance with him? I wonder? I know I'm not your ideal type of girl And there's plenty in this world But maybe you can give us a whirl? Yea I know I'm living in a fantasy For you to have a chance with me I know there's no guarantee. My friends tell me to move on But I don't want to go along With the idea that they could be wrong. You could be just as shy as me You could be the guy for me So thats just what I'm trying to see. I'll continue to wait patiently For the day you notice me I pray to God he'll make a way for me

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Date: 12/25/2017 10:26:00 PM
Very nice; This poem is filled with passion - JT
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Date: 11/30/2017 2:26:00 PM
A warm welcome to Poetry Soup Violetta! My advice would be to become friends, then you never know where it might lead. I can relate to your words in this well written and enchanting poem. : )
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Date: 11/24/2017 1:46:00 PM
Nice flow...
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Date: 11/24/2017 2:26:00 AM
Violetta, first welcome to Poetry Soup were creativity honored and welcomed. Your verse "At First Sight" is quite lovely and warm. Speaks as of a first and true love story. Great job!! --James
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