Mohan Chutani Poet Triolet

At First Glance

Dear pretty love, I am all yours at first glance, shall we
Sit in the garden and match our interests
Amongst fragrant flowers, holding hands
Dear pretty love, I am all yours at first glance, shall we
Get to know if you also have similar strands
With equal intensity as I do for you arrest
Dear pretty love, I am all yours at first glance, shall we
Sit in the garden and match our interests

If we are on the same wavelength, I assure you
together we will dream big and rock our world
All your sorrows will be mine, all my joys for you
If we are on the same wavelength, I assure you
We will not fight and love each other true
Angels will sing and jealous be cupid bird
If we are on the same wavelength, I assure you
together we will dream big and rock our world

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D.W. Rodgers July 18, 2014 at 8:45 PM Hold on to your dream and congrats on your win. Mohan Chutani July 18, 2014 at 10:22 PM Thanks Aberfoyle for your nice comment. Life without dreams and emotions will be robotic. Mohan

Andrea Dietrich July 18, 2014 at 1:36 AM this is a cute poem. Very loving! Mohan Chutani July 18, 2014 at 10:23 PM Thanks Andrea.

Andrea Dietrich July 15, 2014 at 3:40 PM I love how you took the theme to triolet. WELL done!! did this one win a contest? I see a congrats for you down below! Mohan Chutani July 15, 2014 at 10:53 PM Andrea, I got a placement in the list. Thanks for your visit. I could gather that you are also running busy with so much with your daily schedules. Mohan

Casarah Nance July 13, 2014 at 4:57 PM way to rock your world with this winner! grats again you have made a huge impact on the winners lists lately, I applause your mad skillz my friend keep rockin' Mohan Chutani July 15, 2014 at 10:54 PM Casarah, I consider myself to be a learner always. Thanks for your wishes. Mohan

Carrie Richards July 13, 2014 at 12:54 PM This is such a soft, and exquisite poem of infatuation....I love the lightness and the romantic nature of this, Mohan! Lovely! And thank you so much for all your encouragement and exceptional comments. I appreciate them very much! Best wishes! Mohan Chutani July 15, 2014 at 11:00 PM Carrie, thanks for your visit and appreciation. Hope to hear more from you in future. Mohan

Arlene Smith July 13, 2014 at 7:57 AM Such a sweet, ramantic poem, Mohan! Congrats on a great win my friend! Hugs.. Arlene Mohan Chutani July 13, 2014 at 8:46 AM Thanks Arlene for your like and wishes. Mohan

Jared Pickett July 13, 2014 at 6:10 AM You rocked my world with this delightful poem, excellent work!! Congratulations on the win my friend!! :JP)Asavvy1 Mohan Chutani July 13, 2014 at 7:54 AM Thanks Jared. It was kind of you to have extended the entries for laggards like me to write. I think I was 49th to enter. Mohan

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 13, 2014 at 5:06 AM Love at first glance,,n u r done my dear friend! That's how really it is,, congrats on big win! Mohan Chutani July 13, 2014 at 7:55 AM Upma, thanks, and first impressions last a long way. Mohan

Anne-Lise Andresen July 11, 2014 at 5:32 AM - Mohan ... so sweet .... sit in the garden ... hand in hand! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Mohan Chutani July 13, 2014 at 12:43 AM Thanks Anne for your wishes. Mohan