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At First Glance

Dear pretty love, I am all yours at first glance, shall we Sit in the garden and match our interests Amongst fragrant flowers, holding hands Dear pretty love, I am all yours at first glance, shall we Get to know if you also have similar strands With equal intensity as I do for you arrest Dear pretty love, I am all yours at first glance, shall we Sit in the garden and match our interests If we are on the same wavelength, I assure you together we will dream big and rock our world All your sorrows will be mine, all my joys for you If we are on the same wavelength, I assure you We will not fight and love each other true Angels will sing and jealous be cupid bird If we are on the same wavelength, I assure you together we will dream big and rock our world

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D.W. Rodgers

Date: 7/18/2014 8:45:00 PM

Hold on to your dream and congrats on your win.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/18/2014 10:22:00 PM

Thanks Aberfoyle for your nice comment. Life without dreams and emotions will be robotic. Mohan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/18/2014 1:36:00 AM

this is a cute poem. Very loving!

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/18/2014 10:23:00 PM

Thanks Andrea.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2014 3:40:00 PM

I love how you took the theme to triolet. WELL done!! did this one win a contest? I see a congrats for you down below!

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/15/2014 10:53:00 PM

Andrea, I got a placement in the list. Thanks for your visit. I could gather that you are also running busy with so much with your daily schedules. Mohan

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/13/2014 4:57:00 PM

way to rock your world with this winner! grats again you have made a huge impact on the winners lists lately, I applause your mad skillz my friend keep rockin'

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/15/2014 10:54:00 PM

Casarah, I consider myself to be a learner always. Thanks for your wishes. Mohan

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/13/2014 12:54:00 PM

This is such a soft, and exquisite poem of infatuation....I love the lightness and the romantic nature of this, Mohan! Lovely! And thank you so much for all your encouragement and exceptional comments. I appreciate them very much! Best wishes!

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/15/2014 11:00:00 PM

Carrie, thanks for your visit and appreciation. Hope to hear more from you in future. Mohan

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/13/2014 7:57:00 AM

Such a sweet, ramantic poem, Mohan! Congrats on a great win my friend! Hugs.. Arlene

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/13/2014 8:46:00 AM

Thanks Arlene for your like and wishes. Mohan

Jared Pickett

Date: 7/13/2014 6:10:00 AM

You rocked my world with this delightful poem, excellent work!! Congratulations on the win my friend!! :JP)Asavvy1

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/13/2014 7:54:00 AM

Thanks Jared. It was kind of you to have extended the entries for laggards like me to write. I think I was 49th to enter. Mohan

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/13/2014 5:06:00 AM

Love at first glance,,n u r done my dear friend! That's how really it is,, congrats on big win!

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/13/2014 7:55:00 AM

Upma, thanks, and first impressions last a long way. Mohan

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/11/2014 5:32:00 AM

- Mohan ... so sweet .... sit in the garden ... hand in hand! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/13/2014 12:43:00 AM

Thanks Anne for your wishes. Mohan