At First Glance

Unexpectedly as I walk through the door
All I can do is look at the floor
Your deep blue eyes staring me down
Impossible for me to even frown

Shyly I tell you my name
And it instantly sparks a flame
Talking and laughing all night long
I could tell this is where I belong
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 6, 2016 at 10:56 PM
SARAH, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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April 26, 2016 at 5:35 PM
sarah , Well done. Glad to read your poem today. Always ~LINDA~
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February 21, 2015 at 12:21 PM
- Congratulation on your winning poem - I wish you a great weekend,Sarah - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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February 20, 2015 at 11:44 PM
Congs, These Lines means made me smile "Shyly I tell you my name And it instantly sparks a flame Talking and laughing all night long I could tell this is where I belong" I too await for that moment Thanks for Sharing
A  Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 11:24 PM
Sarah, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for the support **SKAT LOVE**
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July 13, 2014 at 11:36 AM
Congratulations on a very fine well-deserved win, Sarah! Beautiful write!
Smith Avatar
July 9, 2014 at 8:09 AM
very cute...short and sweet...hugs Tim
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July 9, 2014 at 7:52 AM
- So sweet and lovely, Sarah ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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