At First Glance

The first time I saw you
I knew you’d be the one
I could tell you were the prize
And that I had won

Your smile was contagious
Your smile made me weak
This was definitely love at first sight
At its ultimate peak

I know this sounds silly
I know it’s surreal
But this was your doing
It’s how you made me feel

But then I saw you for you
An immature little boy
My perfect vision of you
Did you surely destroy

But I’ll keep in my heart
That very first glance
It will forever hurt me
That we didn't have a chance
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 27, 2014 at 6:19 PM
Bukola, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~
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July 7, 2014 at 7:35 PM
Bukola,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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July 7, 2014 at 1:16 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Bukola :) - I choose your first lovely written poem - I like it ! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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July 7, 2014 at 11:54 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
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July 7, 2014 at 11:44 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Bukola. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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July 7, 2014 at 11:21 AM
Bukola,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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