At First Glance

At first glance I thought I had a chance

thought what we had was true romance

until you gave me the old song and dance

but at least you gave me notice in advance



I was mesmerized by your flair and style

my head was in a whirlwind for a little while

up on cloud nine is where I once landed

until you brought me down and left me empty handed



My feet didn't touch the ground whenever you were around

I'd look deep into your eyes but couldn't make a sound

no words could express the love that I thought I had found

when the whole time I never knew that I was being clowned



At first glance it looked so much different to me

but at last now my eyes are open and have come to see

and I'm so thankful to you for setting me free

because you and I were never really meant to be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/19/2015 5:19:00 PM
So easy to be taken in by fancy words and a handsome face - and then reality hits and you realise it simply isn't meant to be - great write:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
Date: 2/22/2015 8:58:00 AM
Thanks Jan, appreciate it.
Date: 7/13/2014 11:38:00 AM
Congratulations on a very fine well-deserved win, Gwen! I wish I could get it all together so perfectly!
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Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
Date: 2/22/2015 9:01:00 AM
Thanks Pandita, sorry I am getting back so late, but I have been off the soup for a minute. But thanks for reading my poetry and for your kind remarks.
Date: 7/3/2014 7:34:00 PM
This wonderful Gwen..Glad you made the right choice...hugs Tim
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Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
Date: 7/6/2014 9:05:00 AM
Thanks Tim, appreciate that
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