At First Glance

All jokes aside, Welcome to my life,
A special word, To help you move forward,
No need to resist it, I'm here to help you through this,
Get up and move, there are things in this world you need to proove,
Your mad becuase your single at a young age, Shoot, I'll help you turn the page,
Giving you that fighting chance, To find someone at first glance, 
Give it that first trial, I know you will find your smile,
Now look, your single life is off the hook,
Your married and have kids now,
 I know you still sit there and wonder how,
It's becuase you went through with it and got your head out of the clouds.

ScottS2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mcafee Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 11:12 PM
Very imaginative....nice....
Fringe Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 3:39 PM
I like this one, but being married was by far the worst experience of my life haha. I see it as legalized slavery now, but I admit I'm just a little bitter towards this idea that was promotted since man was "civilized"--whatever that means. You are passionate for sure Scott, and I bless you my friend.
Foulk Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 11:55 AM
welcome to soup. this was a great piece of creative work.
A  Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 1:01 AM
very clever scott Luv*Skat
Onclaud Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 8:30 PM
hmmm, you made me reflect, scott... a well-scribed work from your creative quill.. :) huggs, nette
Mehta Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 3:42 PM
Creative and thought provoking write, Scott
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