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At First Glance

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From my point of espial, I was instantaneously seduced; just one look at you, my precious, I plunged into the bottomless ocean that is your mesmerizing eyes just to let myself... drown. Date written: 08/06/2020

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/16/2023 3:23:00 AM

Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/16/2023 3:55:00 AM

Thank you very much, Sara:-)

Gary Radice

Date: 8/9/2020 2:59:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this Edward..AND..I learnt a new word today. I hope to 'espial' much more of your work in future. :)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/9/2020 4:41:00 AM

Thank you very much, Gary:-)

Brenda Chiri

Date: 8/8/2020 8:10:00 PM

Edward congrats on your win!:)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/9/2020 4:40:00 AM

Thank you so much, Brenda:-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2020 11:55:00 AM

love it , love it. A very well deserved win, Edward. congrats!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/8/2020 3:33:00 PM

Thank you very much, Andrea:-)

Jenna Logan

Date: 8/7/2020 3:56:00 PM

Beautiful eyes always draw me in. Good write, Edward.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/7/2020 6:42:00 PM

Thank you very much, Jenna:-)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 8/6/2020 8:48:00 AM

Edward, If this isn't poetry then I don't ever want to learn what is. -Richard

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/6/2020 9:23:00 AM

Thank you so much, Richard:-) Glad you loved it...and I appreciate the FAV!