Edward Ibeh Poet Verse

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From my point of espial, 
             I was instantaneously seduced;
           just one look at you, my precious, 
                            I plunged
                 into the bottomless ocean
              that is your mesmerizing eyes
                       just to let myself...
                                drown. 




Date written: 08/06/2020

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Sara Kendrick January 16, 2023 at 3:23 AM Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara Edward Ibeh January 16, 2023 at 3:55 AM Thank you very much, Sara:-)

Gary Radice August 9, 2020 at 2:59 AM Enjoyed reading this Edward..AND..I learnt a new word today. I hope to 'espial' much more of your work in future. :) Edward Ibeh August 9, 2020 at 4:41 AM Thank you very much, Gary:-)

Brenda Chiri August 8, 2020 at 8:10 PM Edward congrats on your win!:) Edward Ibeh August 9, 2020 at 4:40 AM Thank you so much, Brenda:-)

Andrea Dietrich August 8, 2020 at 11:55 AM love it , love it. A very well deserved win, Edward. congrats! Edward Ibeh August 8, 2020 at 3:33 PM Thank you very much, Andrea:-)

Jenna Logan August 7, 2020 at 3:56 PM Beautiful eyes always draw me in. Good write, Edward. Edward Ibeh August 7, 2020 at 6:42 PM Thank you very much, Jenna:-)

Quoth Theraven August 6, 2020 at 8:48 AM Edward, If this isn't poetry then I don't ever want to learn what is. -Richard Edward Ibeh August 6, 2020 at 9:23 AM Thank you so much, Richard:-) Glad you loved it...and I appreciate the FAV!