at dusk

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For: Shaped Haiku 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: JCB Brul
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                                   answer ?

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/5/2025 5:49:00 PM

Creative composition for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K

Chetta Achara
Date: 7/5/2025 6:41:00 PM

Thank you. Doing something like this is way outside my comfort zone.