At A Party

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A Grounding Technique Poetry Contest

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Ballroom, lit and bright
Lighted Christmas tree
Men in suits and hats
Ladies dressed in gowns
All beaming with smiles

Festive feeling
Warm hugs, greetings
Mood for dancing
Gentle touches

Band playing
Singer’s voice
Talks, laughter

Perfume
Cologne

Mint

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/17/2024 4:07:00 AM

I want to personally thank you for your entry in my contest. Very descriptive scene you have painted. Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K

Marilene Evans
Date: 12/17/2024 8:42:00 AM

Thank you for my placement and your compliment. Happy Holidays to you and your family, Sara! Blessings.

thriveni c mysore

Date: 12/16/2024 8:54:00 PM

mint!!! Congratulations dear poet. Cheers!!!

Marilene Evans
Date: 12/16/2024 9:25:00 PM

Thanks, Thriveni! The tables have scattered chocolate candies, mint on them. I'm very particular with chocolate candies, so I rather have the mint. Blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/16/2024 9:19:00 AM

- Great written ... an unforgettable party, Marilene - congratulations :) - hugs

Marilene Evans
Date: 12/16/2024 12:16:00 PM

One of the unforgettable ones. My dance partner and I are regulars there, every first Monday of the month. The last one, being on December 1st had the Christmas motiff. Thank you, Anne-Lise. Hugs!