At a Fair

AT A FAIR

                Me! The team leader of group of just four,
               ventured enthusiastic to explore,
               open large unfamiliar fair ground,
              walking, wandering, running all round.

                          Among the siblings between
                             eleven and sixteen,
                             I was the boldest,
                             being the oldest,
                           acted as competent guide,
                           leading for Ferris wheel-ride.
           
                 On vertical whirling, I feel too scared
                So, rest three boarded, I have not dared.
               Wheel started revolving accelerating speed.
             Something sinister pricked my sixth sense to bleed.
           
              Time scheduled was five minutes only.
             I was watching controlling heart beats coolly.
              Time up, yet the wheel continued its motion            
              Worried spectators went crazy in commotion.
              
                 Being bewildered I had to repent.
               My younger siblings! I had sent.
       Automatic switch -off went wrong, whom to blame?
       At last quick maneuvering solved problem.        
             
          Henceforth whirling wheel was forced to stand still.
          Sudden trauma was chased by zeal and thrill.

    03/17/19
                         First Place
'At A Fair' Contest by Julia Ward.
                                                Third Place
  YOUR CHOICE (6)   Contest by Brian Strand
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Gauthier Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 10:30 AM
Back with more congrats, Anisha.
Dutta Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 11:22 AM
thanks Line. Love
Gauthier Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 9:13 AM
Congrats on your top win, Anisha with this chilling poem.
Dutta Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 10:52 AM
Thanks Line. Love
May Avatar
March 20, 2019 at 11:00 AM
Great write and win Anisha..Congrats
Dutta Avatar
March 20, 2019 at 11:51 AM
Thanks Joseph. Best wishes.
Roper Avatar
March 20, 2019 at 10:43 AM
Nicely done, Anisha,what a thrill. Congratulations on you win.
Canerdy Avatar
March 20, 2019 at 9:31 AM
Anisha, CONGRATS on your well- deserved win! Janice
Dutta Avatar
March 20, 2019 at 10:31 AM
Thanks Janice. Love
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 20, 2019 at 8:21 AM
Congratulations for your top win Anisha! That was a challenging contest prompt, you nailed it! All the best, xomo
Dutta Avatar
March 20, 2019 at 10:30 AM
Thanks Maureen. Love
Ward Avatar
March 20, 2019 at 2:52 AM
A well-deserved top spot in my contest. Hurrah, Anisha. :)
Dutta Avatar
March 20, 2019 at 6:41 AM
Really I rejoice to win top. Blessing n Love.
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