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Asylum

In everyday plight
With no sight
of the light
With no sides
that are bright
Deprived of lies
that are white
There would be only one asylum:
Veritas
ad dominandum

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Poet Destroyer A

July 29, 2012 at 10:00 PM

Lukasz, still congratulating all my sisters past contest. . Now I'm on the poets favorite poem contest.. I'm actually amazed with all these poems. I see why they are chosen as a favorite poem by other poets...a Super Congratulations here. I think I agreed with all the winners in this contest... love~PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 26, 2012 at 12:57 PM

Congratulations on your win in SKAT's "Members Favorite Poem" contest Lukasz. Love, Carol

David Williams

July 26, 2012 at 4:54 AM

Lukasz a belated congrats on your win..David

Carol Eastman

July 25, 2012 at 1:56 PM

Congratulations on your win.

Jonas L. Rozario

July 25, 2012 at 9:37 AM

Congrats on your win Lukasz

Ralph Taylor

July 25, 2012 at 8:57 AM

Congrats, Lukasz. Outstanding. Well deserved win. Kudos. Ralph

Terry O'Leary

July 25, 2012 at 1:56 AM

Nice poem... congratulations on your win... Terry

Debbie Guzzi

July 20, 2012 at 10:46 AM

[okies I give up what does the latin mean?] Congrad's on your fine write making it through to round one in an international poetry contest. Light & Love

Lukasz Walterowicz

July 20, 2012 at 3:32 PM

"Truth will reign" :]

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 18, 2012 at 9:07 AM

Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Lukasz. Love, Carol

Lukasz Walterowicz

July 19, 2012 at 1:49 PM

Thank you Carol, it is an honour. ;]

David William Breidenthal

July 6, 2012 at 6:01 PM

CONGRATS on your win and PLACEMENT! Cx keep it up!

David William Breidenthal

July 6, 2012 at 5:59 PM

Oh, sounds like my situation in the mental hospital....I like this poem...brings back bittersweet memories though. But, great job! :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 16, 2012 at 5:55 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in P.D's "Under Ten Minutes" contest Lukasz. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

April 13, 2012 at 9:59 PM

Lukasz, , a wonderful congratulations.. with your awesome poem in my contest. :-) always~ PD

Gwendolen Song

December 12, 2011 at 8:29 AM

Aren't the best writes the ones that come to us in the spark of a moment...you say to yourself..oh, where's my pen? What am I gonna write this on?..... Enjoyed. Gwendolen

Bob Quigley

December 9, 2011 at 2:15 PM

Congratulations on your win Lukasz

Lukasz Walterowicz

December 9, 2011 at 5:54 PM

Thanks once again, Bob!

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 9, 2011 at 11:40 AM

Congrats on your win Lukasz. Love, Carol

Lukasz Walterowicz

December 9, 2011 at 5:55 PM

Thank you Carol for the second time!

John Freeman

December 8, 2011 at 9:04 AM

Nice flow to your beauty of words on poetic sequence, Lukasz. Congrats on your worthy win. Agape, Moses

Lukasz Walterowicz

December 9, 2011 at 9:29 AM

Thank you for your appreciation, John. This was a pleasant surprise for me, since this poem was written within 2 minutes during a break between classes at university. =)