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Asylum

In everyday plight
With no sight
of the light
With no sides
that are bright
Deprived of lies
that are white
There would be only one asylum:
Veritas
ad dominandum

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2012 10:00:00 PM

Lukasz, still congratulating all my sisters past contest. . Now I'm on the poets favorite poem contest.. I'm actually amazed with all these poems. I see why they are chosen as a favorite poem by other poets...a Super Congratulations here. I think I agreed with all the winners in this contest... love~PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/26/2012 12:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in SKAT's "Members Favorite Poem" contest Lukasz. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 7/26/2012 4:54:00 AM

Lukasz a belated congrats on your win..David

Carol Eastman

Date: 7/25/2012 1:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your win.

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 7/25/2012 9:37:00 AM

Congrats on your win Lukasz

Ralph Taylor

Date: 7/25/2012 8:57:00 AM

Congrats, Lukasz. Outstanding. Well deserved win. Kudos. Ralph

Terry O'Leary

Date: 7/25/2012 1:56:00 AM

Nice poem... congratulations on your win... Terry

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/20/2012 10:46:00 AM

[okies I give up what does the latin mean?] Congrad's on your fine write making it through to round one in an international poetry contest. Light & Love

Lukasz Walterowicz
Date: 7/20/2012 3:32:00 PM

"Truth will reign" :]

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2012 9:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Lukasz. Love, Carol

Lukasz Walterowicz
Date: 7/19/2012 1:49:00 PM

Thank you Carol, it is an honour. ;]

J.W. Earnings

Date: 7/6/2012 6:01:00 PM

CONGRATS on your win and PLACEMENT! Cx keep it up!

J.W. Earnings

Date: 7/6/2012 5:59:00 PM

Oh, sounds like my situation in the mental hospital....I like this poem...brings back bittersweet memories though. But, great job! :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/16/2012 5:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in P.D's "Under Ten Minutes" contest Lukasz. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2012 9:59:00 PM

Lukasz, , a wonderful congratulations.. with your awesome poem in my contest. :-) always~ PD

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/12/2011 8:29:00 AM

Aren't the best writes the ones that come to us in the spark of a moment...you say to yourself..oh, where's my pen? What am I gonna write this on?..... Enjoyed. Gwendolen

Bob Quigley

Date: 12/9/2011 2:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Lukasz

Lukasz Walterowicz
Date: 12/9/2011 5:54:00 PM

Thanks once again, Bob!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/9/2011 11:40:00 AM

Congrats on your win Lukasz. Love, Carol

Lukasz Walterowicz
Date: 12/9/2011 5:55:00 PM

Thank you Carol for the second time!

John Freeman

Date: 12/8/2011 9:04:00 AM

Nice flow to your beauty of words on poetic sequence, Lukasz. Congrats on your worthy win. Agape, Moses

Lukasz Walterowicz
Date: 12/9/2011 9:29:00 AM

Thank you for your appreciation, John. This was a pleasant surprise for me, since this poem was written within 2 minutes during a break between classes at university. =)