Asylum

today i learned a good lesson
stern of a blessing
guessing to much

this place
suffers from lack of original effort
I’m drowning exclusive
Somebody save me 

shall we go on 
I know that you're tired
I'm delusional
I'm trying so hard

life runs
around in a circle
slow down
I’m losing your purpose

do spin the barrel I trigger
pull it and pass it along to me
I’m rushing my hours 
through bullets of freedom

it's all affordable passion
smiles and invisible lashings
how did all of this happen
I fear I knew you so well

I wish you knew it was snowing
you're ill 
I'm sick of the pain pills
lead me to easy
take them and swallow 
I know how you feel

beat me
push me to blossom
I’m drowning exclusive 
somebody save me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Calvanese Jr. Avatar
June 23, 2009 at 8:26 AM
I know where you are coming from and might i just say, Painfully Wonderful, my friend. I hope to read more of these. PeterC
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