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Astral Rain

On the ecliptic of your symphony-- in a fury of verbal commotion, where the delivery becomes creation... where a simple sigh becomes emotion. There is a new melodic resolution taking on the new delivery. There are new songs of revolution since the evolution of MTV. There is a waterfall of light that falls like astral rain, a sight to see in immortal admiration, you'd love to see again and again. It's my transcendental opus, I sure hope that you'll come along... May your world of fear suddenly disappear-- I really hope you will sing along.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/25/2015 10:18:00 AM
That waterfall of light covers the ecliptic symphony with a new song.To overcome fear and trust. and believe in the emotion of another... Excellent poem.
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