Astral Rain

On the ecliptic of your symphony--

in a fury of verbal commotion,
where the delivery becomes creation...

where a simple sigh becomes emotion.

There is a new melodic resolution
taking on the new delivery.
There are new songs of revolution
since the evolution of MTV.

There is a waterfall of light
that falls like astral rain,
a sight to see in immortal admiration,
you'd love to see again and again.

It's my transcendental opus,
I sure hope that you'll come along...
May your world of fear suddenly disappear--

I really hope you will sing along.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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October 25, 2015 at 10:18 AM
That waterfall of light covers the ecliptic symphony with a new song.To overcome fear and trust. and believe in the emotion of another... Excellent poem.
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