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Astral Disposition

Look at the stars, look at how they shine for you and everything you do - Coldplay - Yellow ASTRAL DISPOSITION The twizzle etchings in the Winter sky, electrifying, those sparkling spectators of spectacular spin — the height, the depth, velocity is riveting and it’s all for you, my Dear Millions of miles away, rambunctious smiles, applause — serenade of plucking wings, society of carefree things and it’s all for you, my Dear With sophist swag, quill and ink — destiny curves, loquacious cursive of psaltery stars and it’s all for you, my Dear Integrity and grit — eternity’s candlelit, luminous flames of red, orange and green, yellow, white and blue and it’s all for you, my Dear 2/15/2020 Famous poetic lines 3 - Love songs Poetry Contest Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 2/23/2020 11:36:00 PM
This is simply enchanting Kim. Congratulations on your wonderful top win! xxoo
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Date: 2/23/2020 9:22:00 AM
Congrats on your win Kim..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2020 4:01:00 PM
Thanks, Joseph!
Date: 2/23/2020 8:03:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2020 8:16:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 2/23/2020 5:23:00 AM
I loved this, a lovely take on the line and beautiful dedication to the one you love.. The refrain really worked... Congratulations on your first place in the contest...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2020 8:15:00 AM
Thank you so much, Silent!
Date: 2/19/2020 10:10:00 PM
Your scintillating artistry never fails to amaze and inspire me, Kim. Beautifully creative and vivid. I especially admire; 'With sophist swag, quill and ink -- destiny curves' .. elegant and imaginative! Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2020 10:43:00 PM
Thank you,Susan!
Date: 2/15/2020 10:05:00 PM
Better than the best fireworks display! Dazzling, Kim! Best wishes always, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/16/2020 7:31:00 AM
Thank you, dear friend!
Date: 2/15/2020 5:16:00 PM
Love this. I hope to write a poem on that line too, Kim. Hope I can do as well as you did. Soupmail.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/16/2020 7:32:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea! You are always the standard - such a talented poetess!
Date: 2/15/2020 3:26:00 PM
Wow, this is great Kim, best wishes, very creative...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/16/2020 7:32:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie!
Date: 2/15/2020 10:57:00 AM
Love the idea, "and it’s all for you, my Dear"
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2020 12:44:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo!
Date: 2/15/2020 10:51:00 AM
You expressed this well Kim. Good luck in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2020 12:44:00 PM
Thank you, Richard!
Date: 2/15/2020 10:24:00 AM
Most excellent poetry Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2020 10:25:00 AM
Thank you, Eric! :)

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