Astral Disposition

Look at the stars, look at how they shine for you and everything you do
                                                                          - Coldplay - Yellow


ASTRAL DISPOSITION

The twizzle etchings in the Winter sky, electrifying,
those sparkling spectators of spectacular spin —
the height, the depth, velocity is riveting

and it’s all for you, my Dear

Millions of miles away, rambunctious smiles, applause —
serenade of plucking wings, society of carefree things

and it’s all for you, my Dear

With sophist swag, quill and ink — destiny curves,
loquacious cursive of psaltery stars

and it’s all for you, my Dear

Integrity and grit — eternity’s candlelit, luminous flames
of red, orange and green, yellow, white and blue

and it’s all for you, my Dear

2/15/2020
Famous poetic lines 3 - Love songs Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Silent One
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Marcum Wong Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 11:36 PM
This is simply enchanting Kim. Congratulations on your wonderful top win! xxoo
May Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 9:22 AM
Congrats on your win Kim..
Rodrigues Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 4:01 PM
Thanks, Joseph!
Andresen Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 8:03 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 8:16 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
One Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 5:23 AM
I loved this, a lovely take on the line and beautiful dedication to the one you love.. The refrain really worked... Congratulations on your first place in the contest...
Rodrigues Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 8:15 AM
Thank you so much, Silent!
Ashley Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 10:10 PM
Your scintillating artistry never fails to amaze and inspire me, Kim. Beautifully creative and vivid. I especially admire; 'With sophist swag, quill and ink -- destiny curves' .. elegant and imaginative! Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
Rodrigues Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 10:43 PM
Thank you,Susan!
Wolf Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 10:05 PM
Better than the best fireworks display! Dazzling, Kim! Best wishes always, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 7:31 AM
Thank you, dear friend!
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 5:16 PM
Love this. I hope to write a poem on that line too, Kim. Hope I can do as well as you did. Soupmail.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 7:32 AM
Thank you, Andrea! You are always the standard - such a talented poetess!
Smith Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 3:26 PM
Wow, this is great Kim, best wishes, very creative...
Rodrigues Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 7:32 AM
Thank you, Charlie!
Michael Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 10:57 AM
Love the idea, "and it’s all for you, my Dear"
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 12:44 PM
Thank you, Arturo!
Lamoureux Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 10:51 AM
You expressed this well Kim. Good luck in the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 12:44 PM
Thank you, Richard!
Ashford Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 10:24 AM
Most excellent poetry Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 10:25 AM
Thank you, Eric! :)
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