asthma

I saw American maiden with the  choky  breath 
Panting sideways with the teary face .
I recently listned the siren of ambulance 
And family sobs and I went past to her 
Unfortunately, the ambulance left 


It was a painful tragedy 
Which made kins cried 
I was anxious and tensed 
When  friends rosed questions about why 
I could be rather be speechless 
Eventhough  I was questioned by my college mates 
Which was unspoken incident which made 
me numbed and fearful
it resulted in trauma and  flashbacks 


This is a painful tragedy 
I could nt resist why 
When I listened the wailing voices then 
It made me cry 
I could not forget the girl that 
Was in my mind
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August 27, 2025 at 10:25 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed. (Please check the meaning of cento for types of poetry.)
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