Notes About The Poem

Assuagement

a somber man smiles
    melancholy mood lifted
         a child waved hello



Hello Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Silent One (Winner: 3rd Place)
Date written and posted: 01/16/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 1:29 PM
- Hello, Edward :) - Congratulations on your winning poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 2:58 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise!:-)
Roper Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 12:48 PM
Congratulations on your win, Edward, on Silent One's "Hello" contest! Hugs Eve ~`*
Ibeh Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 2:57 PM
Thank you very much, Eve!:-) I appreciate it
One Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 7:16 AM
Nice senryu Edward.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Ibeh Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 10:26 AM
Thank you so much for placing me, Silent One!:-)
Pandit Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 7:30 AM
That is the power of hello..a moment well captured, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 6:23 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay!:-)
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