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Creative work very expressive...Congrats on your win..Sara

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Nette's "In The Afterglow" contest Moses. Love, Carol

congrats. moe.. you wowed me.. come visit my shadorma poem; have an incite for you! :) huggs, nette

Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,John

new themes and beauty... keep us runnin' eh? Interesting write, Moses, thanks and congrats!

excellent use of the form! Congrad's Light & Love

fact or foible are the words, well done here mate, yes my word, me rhyme slipped off me slate? well done mate.

Love the positive message, this is lovely, John! Congratulations!

Congrats Moses on third place win in Nette's contest with this exquisite entry my friend..luv..

very nice interpretation John....there is hope for this seemingly hopeless girl...I like the viewpoint....my congratulations and best wishes

fact n foible drafts you mobile, in or out the judgement gate, wait till peters at the store, then you get in mate... great poem cobber, Don

Hard realities with Beauty and creativeness reflect very strongly in this wonderful write my friend. The Poem is much deeper than it looks in the first read. Great write. My good wishes for your contest entry and thank you once again for appreciating my poem 'When one sing a song or dance’ and for your good wishes. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra...John Freeman

Beautifully wrapped and ribboned.

It is learning to separate "fact" from "foible" that seems to be difficult sometimes, John. Wanted to read this one again and thank you for my placement in your contest. Love, Carolyn

"Beauty contemplates heaven's gate" What an amazing picture this line presents. Very beautiful and well penned! I'm sure this is gonna be a winner in the contest. Best wishes,my dear John

Excellent, John! I've seen many great entries for Nete's contest and yours is definitely one of the best. Wishing you succcess. It may have been G. who hacked my computer. I changed my password and hope this solves the problem. Love, Carolyn

Soup Mail!!!!

Wishing you the best in the contest Moses with this remarkable piece. Love, Carol I posted a poem and went to enter it in your contest and it is closed wow that was fast.

BeautifullyWritten John....It looks like a Winner!!!!Best of Luck In the Contest!!!!!

This one looks likely to be a winner..very interesting images..thanx for your kind comments, jag

You did well with the form, john. A good way to do the afterglow theme. I am completely stumped on this one, at least for now. Love your final repeating line of this one.

Enjoyed reading this one..Good luck in the contest..Broken dreams are not a happy thing but sometimes they help us grow..Thanks for stopping by my blog and entering my contest "Low Country Boil"...Some dogs do have an allergy to flea bites..I got something called Comfortis at the vet's it is a pill for fleas..Five came off her the day after the pill and I have not seen but two more fleas..I have cats and Rocky had been inside the house and we fought fleas with him..Sara

such brilliance in these beautiful lines Moses my friend.. a tender portrait painted as to the decision of the woman on the tracks.. good luck in the contest luv..

Beautiful poem John.Very thoughtfully penned....a great entry for the contest.Best wishes.

Nice take on the contest,John