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and he watches death like it's a video game his end is the same

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 5/5/2012 7:47:00 AM
I do not wish death on anyone, but some people do improve the world by leaving it.
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Date: 4/25/2012 8:47:00 AM
true, and for that we're all grateful!
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Date: 4/21/2012 9:02:00 PM
very interesting one, john! Let me go find another. I just love haiku.
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Date: 4/22/2012 6:19:00 AM
I get it.
Date: 4/5/2012 7:25:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one John..Glad that you got the spelling corrected on video..Thanks for stopping by..I enjoyed writing that Haiku about the Jets and the Pelicans..I am glad that you got something special from reading it..Have a great eve...Sara
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Date: 4/5/2012 12:29:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem and thanks for the comment. Happy EASTER to you and your family. love phyl
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