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Aspiring

I hide my flame amongst the embers, slowly burning there a little light remains as assssh, fuming gasssseoussss screams a waft of smoke ascends from where, my little light does flare to lurch in shadows on the wall and burst to sparks that sigh; my lowly ember flickering flame may be all my fire seems to dance with stars in the night, is what my fire dreams ...

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Date: 11/6/2009 3:00:00 PM
from stars we come to stars we shall return, this ancient ache of longing urging us to burn, to shine on 'n on from inside out, where illumination is a fire without any doubt
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Date: 11/4/2009 12:07:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your great poetry this afternoon Jerry. Wishing you a week filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/3/2009 6:52:00 PM
Nice poem...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 11/3/2009 5:33:00 PM
Wonderful poerty you got there, Jerry. Thums up .
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