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Aspiration's Song

aspiration sings
be all you can do and be
upon a starburst

By Susan Mills

happinesshaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

April 13, 2013 at 10:04 PM

Susan, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Take care, and enjoy the new upcoming week. Always & Forever! GOODNIGHT **LINDA**

Daver Austin

April 11, 2013 at 12:38 PM

I like the star burst inspiration idea. Congrats on the selection. daver

Carole Cookie Arnold

February 2, 2010 at 9:20 PM

A well written Haiku With many hidden reflections Thank You for your rebiew Love Cookie

Andrea Dietrich

February 2, 2010 at 12:08 PM

A great definition for Aspiration, Susan and thanks for your welcome comment. LUv, andrea

Farah Chamma

February 1, 2010 at 10:53 PM

Great Haiku...Thank you for your comment =) Always, farah

Sara Kendrick

February 1, 2010 at 3:38 PM

Good advice for us all. Keep the creative and educational writes coming. Sara

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

January 31, 2010 at 3:48 PM

Awesome Haiku! Susan! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comments on, "Caught with you". Actually I haven't experienced it. It came from my imagination. Best wishes, Caroline.