Aspiration's Song

aspiration sings be all you can do and be upon a starburst By Susan Mills

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2013 10:04:00 PM

Susan, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Take care, and enjoy the new upcoming week. Always & Forever! GOODNIGHT **LINDA**

Daver Austin

Date: 4/11/2013 12:38:00 PM

I like the star burst inspiration idea. Congrats on the selection. daver

Carole Cookie Arnold

Date: 2/2/2010 9:20:00 PM

A well written Haiku With many hidden reflections Thank You for your rebiew Love Cookie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/2/2010 12:08:00 PM

A great definition for Aspiration, Susan and thanks for your welcome comment. LUv, andrea

Farah Chamma

Date: 2/1/2010 10:53:00 PM

Great Haiku...Thank you for your comment =) Always, farah

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/1/2010 3:38:00 PM

Good advice for us all. Keep the creative and educational writes coming. Sara

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 1/31/2010 3:48:00 PM

Awesome Haiku! Susan! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comments on, "Caught with you". Actually I haven't experienced it. It came from my imagination. Best wishes, Caroline.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2010 7:02:00 PM

Cool haiku. I really like it. Andrea

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 1/29/2010 12:58:00 PM

Great advice Susan for all to heed and thanks Daniel

Date: 1/29/2010 12:13:00 PM

What an uplifting view. So encouraging. You have me smiling with your words. Keep on writing! Karen