Aspirations of a Pebble

Glow in the sunrise
Oh oldest lord of mountains
Warm our frosted souls







5th place in 'Morning Ambiance'
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K. Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 6:48 AM
Loved your title for this, Nick, sets the tone for your haiku perfectly and congrats on your win--no wonder it won :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 5:30 PM
What an interesting perspective, ME LIKES. Andrea and congrats!!
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February 20, 2010 at 1:53 AM
Congratulations Nick on your placement in Raul Moreno’s “Morning Ambiance” contest. Sincerely, Dane Ann
Muzzey Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations on a wonderful Haiku and your win, well deserved. Caryl
Owens Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 6:46 AM
Congratulations on your win...Nice Haiku...Marty
Brown Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 6:41 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest (Morning Ambiance) Nick. Love, Carol
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February 19, 2010 at 4:29 AM
Congrats Nick on your winning poem in the Morning Ambiance contest. a wonderful description of the photo and a more wonderful win for u Nick with your excellent poetic pen...luv. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
Palli Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 12:10 AM
so cute
Moreno Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 9:41 PM
Nick, congrats in your placement in my contest...Raul
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