Aspirational

       anger released... thus
    
     oxygenated... breathing  
 
       ... unfettered for life
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Tor Avatar
January 9, 2025 at 6:10 PM
Great routine you have shared Gershon. Thank you for sharing my friend...
Edmonds  Avatar
January 9, 2025 at 11:06 AM
Oxygenated breathing is hard for some with respiratory problems, and yes it does lead to anger when one suffers that way, not only the sufferer, but the one who’s the closest and sees it and hears it, that’s me and mine… Beryl
Kendrick Avatar
January 9, 2025 at 4:05 AM
I like the use of aspirational here. Not as aspire to be something in life just need to get the emotions correct before you can do anything. I aspire to be able to release bad emotions and let the good ones flow. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Our grandson has Huntington's disease which causes the person to get where they can't swallow and so many of them aspirate food, drink or saliva into the lungs which results in an infection called aspiration pneumonia. His problem isn't bad yet. Sara K
Wolf Avatar
January 9, 2025 at 7:37 PM
I aspire; then I take a shower. lol. Thanks, Sara.
Read Avatar
January 9, 2025 at 2:29 AM
I've just taken a deep breath,.
Wolf Avatar
January 9, 2025 at 7:44 PM
Hope you've exhaled by now, John. :) gw
Singh Avatar
January 9, 2025 at 1:17 AM
Letting go suppressed emotions,deep breathing helps and live without emotional restrictions.Very nice.
Wolf Avatar
January 9, 2025 at 7:46 PM
Thank you, Akham. Your comment leaves me breathless. ~ Gershon
Bayles Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 10:38 PM
Your Aspirational poem is inspirational.
Wolf Avatar
January 9, 2025 at 7:57 PM
I was desperational. lol.
Bangalee Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 10:26 PM
it's a great desire to live a long life healthy and wealthy.
Wolf Avatar
January 9, 2025 at 7:48 PM
and fully oxygenated! Thanks, Mahtab.
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