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Aspect of Aloneness

Hardly venture into such verse. In her bedroom, she wrote her curse. She despised bright pupils at Yale. If water drops could tell their tale. She went on long walks in the drought. They urged her to blend in and flout. In gray rain, she went past wan shale. If water drops could tell their tale. Had they fed the felled holy trees? Her thongs sloshed in a thoughtful breeze. Gather, freeze, pour down wet and hail. If water drops could tell their tale. Where had those lovely old dribs been? which dropped sunk ships and saved Tholepin. She found longing despite the hail. If water drops could tell their tale. Written: August 09, 2022 A Kyrielle about Water Poetry Contest Sponsor- Kim Rodrigues Checked by HMS.COM 16 Lines 8syllables each/ 4 Stanzas.
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Proxenos Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 6:31 AM
Hi Lasaad, such a lovely poem, beautifully crafted with great poetic description for the contest. All the best my friend, Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Dietrich Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 1:23 PM
Cool poem, Lassad. the repeating line is really inventive.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 10:54 AM
Hello Lassad loneliness is not always a good thing. I feel for her. Blessings my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 11:50 AM
Hello I enjoy Andre Rieu's music. Enjoy your day my friend.
Pandit Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 7:55 AM
Loneliness paints her emotions throughout my friend. I like how the repeating line conveys of her silent feelings in pain. Best to you for a win, Lasaad.
Buhagiar Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 10:38 PM
Rather sad but loved the form in this poem. Best for a win
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