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Asparagus

spring asparagus' tender shoots grow somewhere today... cold winter rain here

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/25/2013 7:08:00 AM

I like the feeling of this Sara, the longing for spring. Light & Love

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/22/2012 5:47:00 AM

But the aroma it causes.Eww

John Loving Iii
Date: 12/22/2012 5:48:00 AM

A pee fart

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/21/2012 9:28:00 PM

Once again Sara, your haiku hold the best image of the day... love eating asparagus'...always~pd

Jacob Cra

Date: 12/21/2012 3:23:00 PM

Nice poem. Dear Sara, I heard you have had poems published. I'd really like some tips to get into a magazine. Can you help me out? (NOTICE: I WRITE FUNNY POETRY... NOT SAD STUFF OR ANYTHING)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 12/21/2012 12:49:00 PM

Nice Haiku Sara; I know all about Asaragus, I just don't eat them and people say I can cook them. I worked in them so much when I was 15. They grow in Illinois In the Spring. Thanks for sharing, brings memories. Lucilla

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/21/2012 5:43:00 AM

and here too, you and your family have a wonderful festive season, Sara, your poems are so precious

Rollo West

Date: 12/20/2012 10:57:00 PM

Hi Sara, really enjoyed this write. Ron

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/20/2012 5:42:00 PM

nice write thinking of a dryer climate and sunshine. Hope you have a better day tomorrow.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/20/2012 5:36:00 PM

nice one! i love the idea that someplace else, the weather (and life) is so different. you've captured that in just a few words and have done so very well...

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/20/2012 12:05:00 PM

We are having some very cold winter rain here today! Soon we will be having snow instead of cold rain...I don't know which is worse...I don't like driving in the snow though so I guess that would be worse! I don't like asparagus unfortunately, wish I did though, it's really good for you! This is a tremendous write my friend, I really loved reading this fantastic poem this afternoon! What stupendous piece, Great Work!!

David Williams

Date: 12/20/2012 12:00:00 PM

Sara and here too. like the haiku though...David