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Asparagus

spring asparagus'
tender shoots grow somewhere today...
cold winter rain here

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Debbie Guzzi

January 25, 2013 at 7:08 AM

I like the feeling of this Sara, the longing for spring. Light & Love

John Loving Iii

December 22, 2012 at 5:47 AM

But the aroma it causes.Eww

John Loving Iii

December 22, 2012 at 5:48 AM

A pee fart

Poet Destroyer A

December 21, 2012 at 9:28 PM

Once again Sara, your haiku hold the best image of the day... love eating asparagus'...always~pd

Jacob Cra

December 21, 2012 at 3:23 PM

Nice poem. Dear Sara, I heard you have had poems published. I'd really like some tips to get into a magazine. Can you help me out? (NOTICE: I WRITE FUNNY POETRY... NOT SAD STUFF OR ANYTHING)

Lucilla Carrillo

December 21, 2012 at 12:49 PM

Nice Haiku Sara; I know all about Asaragus, I just don't eat them and people say I can cook them. I worked in them so much when I was 15. They grow in Illinois In the Spring. Thanks for sharing, brings memories. Lucilla

Harry Horsman

December 21, 2012 at 5:43 AM

and here too, you and your family have a wonderful festive season, Sara, your poems are so precious

Rollo West

December 20, 2012 at 10:57 PM

Hi Sara, really enjoyed this write. Ron

Doris Culverhouse

December 20, 2012 at 5:42 PM

nice write thinking of a dryer climate and sunshine. Hope you have a better day tomorrow.

Ilene Bauer

December 20, 2012 at 5:36 PM

nice one! i love the idea that someplace else, the weather (and life) is so different. you've captured that in just a few words and have done so very well...

Russell Sivey

December 20, 2012 at 12:05 PM

We are having some very cold winter rain here today! Soon we will be having snow instead of cold rain...I don't know which is worse...I don't like driving in the snow though so I guess that would be worse! I don't like asparagus unfortunately, wish I did though, it's really good for you! This is a tremendous write my friend, I really loved reading this fantastic poem this afternoon! What stupendous piece, Great Work!!