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spring asparagus' tender shoots grow somewhere today... cold winter rain here

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 1/25/2013 7:08:00 AM
I like the feeling of this Sara, the longing for spring. Light & Love
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Date: 12/22/2012 5:47:00 AM
But the aroma it causes.Eww
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Date: 12/22/2012 5:48:00 AM
A pee fart
Date: 12/21/2012 9:28:00 PM
Once again Sara, your haiku hold the best image of the day... love eating asparagus'...always~pd
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Date: 12/21/2012 3:23:00 PM
Nice poem. Dear Sara, I heard you have had poems published. I'd really like some tips to get into a magazine. Can you help me out? (NOTICE: I WRITE FUNNY POETRY... NOT SAD STUFF OR ANYTHING)
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Date: 12/21/2012 12:49:00 PM
Nice Haiku Sara; I know all about Asaragus, I just don't eat them and people say I can cook them. I worked in them so much when I was 15. They grow in Illinois In the Spring. Thanks for sharing, brings memories. Lucilla
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Date: 12/21/2012 5:43:00 AM
and here too, you and your family have a wonderful festive season, Sara, your poems are so precious
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Date: 12/20/2012 10:57:00 PM
Hi Sara, really enjoyed this write. Ron
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Date: 12/20/2012 5:42:00 PM
nice write thinking of a dryer climate and sunshine. Hope you have a better day tomorrow.
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Date: 12/20/2012 5:36:00 PM
nice one! i love the idea that someplace else, the weather (and life) is so different. you've captured that in just a few words and have done so very well...
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Date: 12/20/2012 12:05:00 PM
We are having some very cold winter rain here today! Soon we will be having snow instead of cold rain...I don't know which is worse...I don't like driving in the snow though so I guess that would be worse! I don't like asparagus unfortunately, wish I did though, it's really good for you! This is a tremendous write my friend, I really loved reading this fantastic poem this afternoon! What stupendous piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 12/20/2012 12:00:00 PM
Sara and here too. like the haiku though...David
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