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Asp

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What I am calling an Acrostic Haiku!

spying a snake sliding over sand . . . picnic at sunset May 6, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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James Inman
Date: 10/13/2019 3:04:00 PM
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A new form for me Andrea.
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/9/2018 11:44:00 AM
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love the haiku, I didn't enter I wasn't sure what he wanted..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/9/2018 3:47:00 PM
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I entered just for the heck of it, knowing I did not have a chance anyway!
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/7/2018 3:26:00 PM
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I am quite sure that this is the first acrostic-haiku that I've ever come across, Andrea! It's alright for a snake to have a desert picnic at sunset, but definitely not for me:) I hope the judge will take into consideration the creative aspect! Regards // paul
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/7/2018 3:41:00 PM
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2018 3:11:00 PM
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Well done! The synergy of acrostic and haiku with vivid images!
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Harry Horsman
Date: 5/7/2018 8:19:00 AM
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The asp of old Egypt, still a symbol over there, as your poetry is here..
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 5/7/2018 8:04:00 AM
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Brilliant Andrea... Stunning Imagery...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/7/2018 6:18:00 AM
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You captured the essence in a few words..this will become a new form of haiku created by AD..good work, Andrea.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/6/2018 8:45:00 PM
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Still inventing forms ! Well done, Andrea.
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Matthew Anish
Date: 5/6/2018 5:56:00 PM
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Tale of a snake - clever acrostic! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/6/2018 4:03:00 PM
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what a clever idea to write a haiku, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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