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Hope I remember everything I wanna say, Probably will if I'm feeling this way... Your real, no filter so I'm expecting the truth got a couple questions for you.. The truth can't change the love I have for you but definately can change the things that I'd do. I don't plan on over reacting but you need to be understanding.. Give me a clear explanation on where you see us going.. I'm headed to the top regardless if you plan on rolling.. I picture you my right hand, riding could be my imagination but I think it's the connection.. Hope this just ain't another lesson cus I look at you as a blessing. You already know how I'm feeling& when you were gone a big part of me was missing. When I speak you listen, in the letters.. It's my heart your reading.. So don't break me before you ever decieve me, leave me. Especially if in your heart you feel you will never love me .

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Date: 12/3/2012 11:17:00 PM
very nice indeed. well done.
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Date: 11/30/2012 11:15:00 AM
thanks for the reads& support everything I write is from the heart
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Date: 11/26/2012 9:43:00 PM
Love poetry when its spoken from deep within...enjoyed this piece here...please continue writing..regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 11/26/2012 3:04:00 PM
the truth hurts sometimes,great write SHNKIMMEL
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Date: 11/26/2012 5:41:00 AM
A heart felt plea for honesty and truth... excellent write, dear friend! Hugs, Jack
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Date: 11/22/2012 2:32:00 PM
One moving poem, very well written. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/18/2012 3:38:00 PM
Deep deep piece my poet friend. I feel also we write similar. That was so nice to read from you... I thank you. xxx hugs michael
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Date: 11/18/2012 2:18:00 PM
Thank you for your comment on my poem. It was sort of like a freestyle. Just a quick write off the too of my head! I enjoyed your poem. Very good write. Welcome to poetry soup -v
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