Paula Goldsmith Poet Footle

Ask Dad

Ask dad                                                                                                      engaged
 

wedding                                                                                                                                                                                         I do                                                                                                               

 
party                                                                                                            cut cake                                               

 

that night                                                                                                    alone

 

rental                                                                                                                                                                                                        on own

 

baby                                                                                                            bottles
 

now old                                                                                                        at peace 


Date Written: 2/1/2021

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Sara Kendrick September 26, 2024 at 1:30 PM Way to go with these Footles. They are not so easy to write but can be really nice when finished. Sara K Paula Goldsmith September 27, 2024 at 1:01 PM Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. Yes, Footles can take extra time/thought but can be fun to write. Have a blessed day.....................

Caren Krutsinger February 8, 2021 at 10:03 PM lovely footle Paula. I have tried them; I think they are especially difficult. Paula Goldsmith February 10, 2021 at 7:33 AM Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day.....................

Anne-Lise Andresen February 5, 2021 at 1:53 AM - Fun to read, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paula Goldsmith February 5, 2021 at 12:57 PM Thank You, for your note. Glad you like this fun Footle write. It was fun to write. Have a blessed day/weekend with hugs.....................

JC Brul February 3, 2021 at 3:50 PM Wow! This is fun Paula! Keep coming. Footle rocks!! Paula Goldsmith February 4, 2021 at 12:56 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this Footle write. Have a blessed day.....................

Angela Crabtree February 2, 2021 at 9:29 AM This one made me smile, Paula. Hope you're having a good week :) Paula Goldsmith February 2, 2021 at 11:45 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one and it made you smile. I love to make people smile/laugh. Have a blessed day/week......................

Andrea Dietrich February 1, 2021 at 3:54 PM It's good it ended with him at peace. Cute little story! Paula Goldsmith February 2, 2021 at 6:39 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like the ending. Peace is always a good thing to the. Have a blessed day writing away........

Mystic Rose Rose February 1, 2021 at 11:03 AM better be old and at peace with oneself then young and unhappy, lovely sentiment dear Paula xo Paula Goldsmith February 2, 2021 at 6:37 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day writing away......................