Asinine

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I have been giving some thought about life and how things happened in my life and how they worked out for my best interest but also how that I learned life lessons with so many factors in my life..Sara

Stand of Geogia elegant pines On little six acres 'tis mine Saved from woodman's sharp ax Once_ twice as thick, here draw the line Other life's problems should've been asinine Let this not be climax (Using asinine here to mean stubborn or obstinate like a mule)

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Tim B

Date: 4/19/2012 11:26:00 AM

Well, with a title like that I could not pass up a read of this one Mrs. Sara. Indeed, I'll be praying the woodman's ax never falls upon those elegant pines of yours. Seems like he never stops trying to get past the lines we draw? Great poetry, no pun intended that you mentioned asinine and mule's and it was a tail-rhyme? :)