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'a-Sigh'

Parched death when quenches its thirst from stream of life, it dries up with a...SIGH...


Date : 10/13/2016

Note : For the contest (Life or Death one liner) by Silent One.
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Copyright © Afzal Nusker | Year Posted 2016

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Anna-Marie Docherty

October 18, 2016 at 8:27 AM

Indeed I believe you could be right - I can imagine nature's sigh of regret amongst those who love nature; if a stream - water without which life would be nulled were to dry out... Such sad thoughts left when you consider what would be left of what was once there. Provokes a lot of thought there...

December 17, 2016 at 12:19 AM

I like your thoughts on my scribble. I agree with you totally.

October 16, 2016 at 9:16 PM

This is a very interesting take on the theme Afzal. A subtle thought provoker.

October 16, 2016 at 10:58 PM

Thank you, John.

Andrea Dietrich

October 16, 2016 at 7:51 PM

sure do love the idea of death drying up!! Congrats on your win.

October 16, 2016 at 11:00 PM

Thank you very much, Andrea.

October 16, 2016 at 1:26 PM

So creative poem , Afzal, congratulations on your win!

October 16, 2016 at 10:58 PM

Thank you very much, Eve.

October 15, 2016 at 2:39 AM

a wonderful win, afzal.. congrats and huggs

October 15, 2016 at 4:30 AM

Thank you, Nette.

October 14, 2016 at 11:05 PM

Good use of personification--Congrats on your win! Janice

October 15, 2016 at 2:28 AM

Thank you, Janice.

October 14, 2016 at 10:32 PM

Hi Afzal, This is so sad. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

October 14, 2016 at 10:49 PM

Thank you, Alexis.

October 14, 2016 at 8:37 PM

Sadly stated, congratulations Afzal...

October 14, 2016 at 10:57 PM

Thank you, Charlie.

October 14, 2016 at 8:54 AM

Sighing with you...

October 14, 2016 at 9:15 AM

You made me smile with your comment.

October 14, 2016 at 5:37 AM

Very deep ... GL ...

October 14, 2016 at 5:48 AM

Thank you, Probir.

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