Ashford

The red and the blue have faded to black, It's later than late and I'd love to go back To the place that I left, full of light and love-sure, But I can't, for I wait for the train to your door.

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Ruben Ramos

Date: 11/9/2011 5:08:00 AM

Looking back I tend to see only the light and delightful. Going back I'd experience the worries and pains that occurred. Looking forward seems much more hopeful. My train keeps moving, it seems, but never on my schedule. It's brought me here to your door. Thanks Annie.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/24/2011 6:27:00 AM

Thank you for posting and allowing us to enter into your world of poetry today. The diversity of our poets and their poetry here at PoetrySoup is astounding. It was my pleasure to read your poetry today Annie. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/23/2011 5:51:00 PM

Nice rhyming write quite creative and enjoyable, Annie