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Ashes of My Dream

Strings all over me Pulling me backwards Tying me down Down the ashes of my dreams My fear blazed like a wild fire Their tongues scorched me like devouring wild fire Their tongues had no positive utterance in my dream I could see my dream in ashes Despite scorching heat of criticism My dream never died In the ashes of my dreams I could see it striving I could see a flicker of a flame surviving the dying fire One complement snatched me out of a blazing fire Like a helicopter, it flew me away from my fears Up in the sky my dream withered ashes like a tree tilt its old leaves It was not just a ride but a revival of my dream Like a surviving little piece of wood in ashes My dream is alive and has kept me fighting My dream is now a reality; you can do the same with yours Never let your dream perish in ashes of your dreams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/19/2012 11:15:00 PM
wow! you did a great job in this poem Bongani, I love the strong stanzas within, I'm going to fave this one :) thanks for stopping by to my page before :D - hug, yanny
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Bongani Zungu
Date: 12/21/2012 7:16:00 AM
Ngiyabonga(means thank you in Zulu). Thank you, Yanny
Date: 12/19/2012 10:32:00 AM
Yes, you have to hang on and never let go of your dreams, very well done, blessings,Carl
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Bongani Zungu
Date: 12/21/2012 7:14:00 AM
Hi Carl. Thank you for your comment. *Incwasimende da poet, salute*

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