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Ashes In the Snow

Around a winter fire’s flames That in the night did glow, We sat and waited for the words of "Once, long long ago..." The wind roamed through the forest trees As beams of moonlight fell. My fingers twisted in the snow As midnight cast its spell. We saw the graves of ancient kings Now resting with their scars, We heard the legends of their lives Beneath the winter stars. We watched as poets penned each phrase In words that still do last, And saw the dreamers dream their dreams, The dreamers of the past. So years have gone, and I look back At ashes in the snow, Where fires burned till late at night With tales of long ago. The wind still roams among those trees And stars still come at eve, And when the winter dusk returns I don my coat and leave. I walk the oh so well known path Still white with timeless snow, And far ahead, between the trees, I see the fire’s glow. As once I waited in the ring For night to cast its spell, As once I listened to the tales It’s now my turn to tell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/2/2013 1:05:00 PM
Wow, very good poem poet
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Date: 1/10/2012 6:35:00 AM
Wow ,this is what I call a keeper ,it will last through the ages. Wonderful writing Rauwolfia. Anne
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Date: 4/19/2011 10:31:00 AM
Tried to comment on this when I first joined the site (wouldn't work). This was my first read on this site and I was astounded by the quality of your Rhyme, Rhytm and Theme. I have now looked at more of your work and if this quality goes across the site I may be here for a long time. Thanks for some excellent reads.... Ivor
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Date: 4/17/2011 9:05:00 AM
Sounds much like a ballad to me. Beautifully written with nice rhyme. Much enjoyed !!
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Date: 4/17/2011 7:38:00 AM
Beautiful poem Well written , a jewel to read. Anne
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Date: 3/18/2011 7:10:00 AM
I just can't believe how fast this week has gone by. I am enjoying reading the many magnificent poems here at PoetrySoup this morning. I am glad yours was among the ones I was able to read Rauwolfia. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with sunshine and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/17/2011 7:29:00 AM
An excellent poem little Sister! A well written sentimental poem. I see a lot of growth in your style since last I read your work. I can't help but feel some pride:)
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