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Ashes

Ashes More silences than soft embraces, now we're lost with little left to say; what used to be the flame of love has gone to ashes, pale and cold and gray. Stilted words and courtesies are all that seem to slip from our tired lips as quick the fount of memory fades, the dying ember flickers now and dips.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/20/2008 5:38:00 AM
Hi Keith, we've all been there, sad but true, so very well summed up, a really good write, best wishes Ann.
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Date: 11/14/2008 7:02:00 AM
Beautiful. Thank you for the comment on my poem "Devouring Midnight". To answer your questions, no I am not British. I've also been around on poetry soup for quite a while I just haven't posted until recently. Thank you again for you kind words.
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Date: 11/14/2008 6:22:00 AM
Lovely Keith... sad soft words make this very effective...I love it (except for the contraction of even)
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Date: 11/14/2008 1:47:00 AM
Good poem, nicely penned.
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Date: 11/13/2008 10:40:00 PM
Beautiful poem Keith. The imagry was delightful. Bev Briatico
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