Ashes

Residual heat
from these dying embers
wasn’t enough for you.

Suddenly,
out of the blue,
a great breath you blew
upon them to spew,
and now here I stew 

unable to fathom
why, and the way
of dousing this flame
along with the rest.

Total
intent to stay cool
in the eager inferno
of your unfairness;
an unshakable rule.

Must confess my way
out of this mess
and admit my own fuel..

I played along,
Yes,
my heart smudged out
on a wrinkled sleeve
from choked gray ashes
of what I used to believe
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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April 8, 2016 at 3:26 AM
RACHEL, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. ~LINDA~
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July 3, 2015 at 7:36 PM
Hi Rachel this is awesome, stumbled across this poem. Thanks for sharing. Have yourself a safe and Happy 4th of July.... Love SKAT
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