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Ashes

Residual heat from these dying embers wasn’t enough for you. Suddenly, out of the blue, a great breath you blew upon them to spew, and now here I stew unable to fathom why, and the way of dousing this flame along with the rest. Total intent to stay cool in the eager inferno of your unfairness; an unshakable rule. Must confess my way out of this mess and admit my own fuel.. I played along, Yes, my heart smudged out on a wrinkled sleeve from choked gray ashes of what I used to believe

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/8/2016 3:26:00 AM
RACHEL, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/3/2015 7:36:00 PM
Hi Rachel this is awesome, stumbled across this poem. Thanks for sharing. Have yourself a safe and Happy 4th of July.... Love SKAT
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