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Ash of Dawn

All was hushed this eerie dawn
For ash had claimed the day
Disguising shape and muffling noise
Enshrouding all in grey--
Long the haze had swathed the cliffs
In veils of silver white
Till overnight like fleeting soot
It vanished with the light.


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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June 15, 2016 at 10:48 AM
Zelene, sorry for taking so long In stopping by. Congratulations. Skat
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June 12, 2016 at 7:11 PM
oh this is lovely, congrats on your win in the contest Zelene
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June 12, 2016 at 4:58 PM
I really really LOVE this one, Zelene. So short but such a flowing and smooth read. One of my favorites on the list. Congrats for your win.
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