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Ash Fall

landscape grand tremor volcano island’s ash fall* scenery turns gray... ...when problems shake heart I turn to God**, my anchor beautifying wondrous life.**
*Taal Volcano in our country is active. **Hebrew6:19 Which hope we have as an anchor of the soul, both sure and stedfast... ***(Second stanza added on January 25, 2023) January 25, 2020 4th place, "A Nature Themed Haiku with Color" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin; judged on 1/28/2020.

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Date: 1/29/2020 11:41:00 PM
Congrats in the contest, sweetie
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Date: 1/29/2020 4:58:00 PM
I hope everyone is safe beata! A very vivid description of the power of nature:-) many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/29/2020 6:25:00 AM
A different take on the theme. Congratulations, Kai
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Date: 1/29/2020 3:23:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great nature themed haiku, Beata :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/29/2020 1:22:00 AM
This is unique.. Nice Haiku.. Be safe.. Congrats on your placement Beata..
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Date: 1/29/2020 1:20:00 AM
Back to say Congratulations!
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Date: 1/28/2020 8:16:00 PM
Thoughts and prayers, Beata. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/28/2020 6:01:00 PM
Beata, congratulations on your winning placement with your unique haiku!
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Date: 1/25/2020 4:52:00 PM
thoughts and prayers for all in its path... your haiku comes to life and shows the scene... hugs and blessings
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Date: 1/25/2020 12:40:00 PM
Beata, Our thoughts and prayers are with all of you. Really lovely, descriptive imagery carrying out your theme.
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