Beata Agustin Poet Haiku

Ash Fall

landscape grand tremor
volcano island’s ash fall*
scenery turns gray...

...when problems shake heart
I turn to God**, my anchor
beautifying wondrous life.**

*Taal Volcano in our country is active.
**Hebrew6:19 Which hope we have as an anchor of the soul, both sure and stedfast... 
***(Second stanza added on January 25, 2023)

January 25, 2020
4th place, "A Nature Themed Haiku with Color" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin; judged on 1/28/2020.

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Andrea Dietrich January 29, 2020 at 11:41 PM Congrats in the contest, sweetie

Jan Allison January 29, 2020 at 4:58 PM I hope everyone is safe beata! A very vivid description of the power of nature:-) many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Kai Michael Neumann January 29, 2020 at 6:25 AM A different take on the theme. Congratulations, Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2020 at 3:23 AM - Congratulations on your great nature themed haiku, Beata :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas January 29, 2020 at 1:22 AM This is unique.. Nice Haiku.. Be safe.. Congrats on your placement Beata..

Sam Kauffman January 29, 2020 at 1:20 AM Back to say Congratulations!

Charles Messina January 28, 2020 at 8:16 PM Thoughts and prayers, Beata. Congrats on your win!

Tania Kitchin January 28, 2020 at 6:01 PM Beata, congratulations on your winning placement with your unique haiku!

Sandra Adams January 25, 2020 at 4:52 PM thoughts and prayers for all in its path... your haiku comes to life and shows the scene... hugs and blessings

Sam Kauffman January 25, 2020 at 12:40 PM Beata, Our thoughts and prayers are with all of you. Really lovely, descriptive imagery carrying out your theme.