Ascent

Mind ignites the world turns slow
Colors ripple thoughts overflow
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Goldsmith Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 11:10 AM
So much said in just 2 lines. Have a fun day writing away.......
Delegans Avatar
December 24, 2025 at 1:53 PM
Thanks, Paula.
Rolland Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 1:49 AM
thoughtful poem to be read twice, enjoyed
Rolland Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 1:49 AM
thoughtful poem to be read twice, enjoyed
Delegans Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 10:42 AM
Thank you, Yann!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 5:31 PM
magnificent and complete couplet
Delegans Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 10:41 AM
Thank you, Sara!
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