Ascension

I didn't win in the poetry competition.
Did you not enjoy my vision?
Was it because my poem was slightly odd?
Or was it because I didn't mention God?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Sweetheart Avatar
November 27, 2009 at 8:49 AM
U have your own special brand of poetry, Daniel, as each of us on the Soup contributes to the site.. just keep trying by submitting your poetry... contests are free and not to be disillusioned if u did not win.. the competitive spirit lies within u so don't give up... your poem today is an expression of your interior self and its good to release what u feel... isn't that what poetry is all about?.. keep trying.. enjoyed reading this today.. luv.. Linda--Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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November 26, 2009 at 6:57 PM
Beautifully penned poem. All the best.
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