Ascend

Ascend

An awakening of extraordinary proportion
Such conceptual notions a mental extortion

A eureka moment indeed
Ancients wisdom heed
Four elements ubiquitous
Attention paid solicitous

Air in total empathy with earth, water and fire
Ascend spectacular astral to obtain my desire

First time traveller I’m gullible
Ensconced in soft bubble
Of etheric ectoplasm
Safe from hallow chasm

Led down a deep depression by rambunctious elementals
Full of buffoonery, braggadocio and tough as Rose petals

Wise words now remembered
Elementals can be rendered
To your purpose fully
May yet cajole and bully

Hidden words of Will must vibrate outwardly upon
The Air to offer to He in the great house beyond....


18/15/2018

unsure of first poem date but definitely joined in 2018. 
First joined 14/02/2018
First poem was “At Last”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 11:07 PM
Awesome! Congratulations on your win!
Waters Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 2:08 AM
Those words went into your topic seamlessly - impressive. Congratulations
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June 12, 2018 at 12:11 PM
A creative engaging penning Jeff, Congratulations on your win! :) xomo
Gauthier Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 10:04 AM
Bravo, Jeff. Superb poem. Congrats on your win.
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June 12, 2018 at 9:40 AM
Congratulations, Jeff! Nice work on the contest requirements! -Cary
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