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As You Who Had No Toil

The rosebud has little to do Just drink its fill of waters From the strong sturdy vine that's true Kissed by dew that matters And enjoy the kiss of sunlight Upon woven petals Open little each day that's bright Sun radiant aerials When opened sufficient indeed Host a party to bees Butterflies who on nectar feed Won't even run from me Like they are glued to your nectar Petals are to full extent Begin to fall of your vector When petals gone your scent On petals linger to be stored In jar_ pressed for oil Then I would want to be used As you who had no toil

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/29/2010 2:04:00 AM
i love you writing Sara thank you duncan
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Date: 10/9/2010 12:11:00 PM
enjoyed your poem, Sara,..p.d.
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Date: 10/3/2010 9:00:00 AM
That is a lovely tribute to roses, Sara! Thank you for you kind comments and have a great week!...Gert
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Date: 10/3/2010 8:11:00 AM
Smile ~ I find wisdom here dear amid this lovely garden which "Your Beauty" has created &, "Yes," to reap is wonderful but, to sow is to "Love"....Smile, I'm wondering about that 'Vector' though ~ Smile ~ "'Beautiful Sara;' A Fave; Just Like 'You!!!'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to You Always &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Thank You for Stopping By &, 'Have The Most Blessed & Beautiful of Days 'Dear, Beautiful Sara Kendrick;'" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 10/3/2010 8:03:00 AM
Smile ~ "This Is Amazingly Beautiful 'Dear Beautiful Sara Kendrick!!!'" ~ One can Always feel inside themselves when another poet brushes from the depths of "Their Beautiful Souls" &, there are not many things within this life which can compare to such "Magnificent Splendour" if at all, this, sweetened nectar flowing through the veins of the readers deepest of hearts; this is what "Your Treasures" have done this day with "This Beautiful Gem!!!" ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 10/3/2010 7:22:00 AM
Nice write,, very enjoyed....Michael
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Date: 10/3/2010 3:25:00 AM
this poem stirs of flavours and scents ... hmmm wonderful poetry here Sara .. thanks again for the lovely comment on my poem love Jayne
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Date: 10/2/2010 11:30:00 PM
A pretty poem and fun to read, Sara. I hope to read your blog tomorrow. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/2/2010 8:49:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this poem. I love to watch the flowers bloom and watch the insects come to get their nectar. Makes me enjoy the summer so much and now we have only a few warm days left or maybe not. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 10/2/2010 6:21:00 PM
pretty write mom!! enjoyed!
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Date: 10/2/2010 5:27:00 PM
Thanks so much for trying, I really appreciate it. I know with all you have going on in your life there are much more important things than my silly contests. Your friend...Light & Love
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