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As we walk hand in hand

As we walk hand in hand

Today as we walk hand in hand
Happily through pure white sand
The love within my heart for thee
It flows to you so tenderly.

The ocean waves ebb to and thro
As hand in hand along we go
Bare feet in the silky sand
 The sun shines down and life’s so grand

We stop, the two of us and kiss
Oh how nice to feel such bliss
As love matures we two, entwined
Such perfect sweetness we do find

Today as we walk hand in hand
Happily through pure white sand.

Vera Duggan 10 July 2014.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/8/2018 7:11:00 AM
Soft & Romantic piece of work
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Vera Duggan
Date: 1/8/2018 6:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Payal and thank you for taking the time to visit my page, take care.......Vera
Date: 12/31/2017 7:12:00 PM
Such a lovely poem Vera. And a wonderful witnessing to your's and Peter's love.
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Date: 12/31/2017 10:31:00 PM
Thank you Robert, haven't seen you for a while but both Peter and I gave it a rest and now we are both back, hope you are well, take care and A HAPPY NEW YEAR......Vera
Date: 12/31/2017 5:07:00 PM
You see everything in a different way when you walk with the one you love , a touch of romance brings color to look like rainbows. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 12/31/2017 6:30:00 PM
Hi Eve, yes you are right, we quite often walk along the beach hand in hand and yes it is a wonderful feeling, you feel loved, I am sure you and hubby do the same,in fact you both remind me of Peter and I, take care my dear friend.......Vera xx
Date: 6/3/2016 8:20:00 AM
Very soothing rhythm. Nice feelings too.
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Date: 12/31/2017 6:28:00 PM
Hi Cheryl, I am ever so sorry I haven't answered your comment but honestly I didn't think anyone else would comment so I never went back to it, but thank you ever so much, HAPPY NEW YEAR and take care......Vera
Date: 8/14/2014 1:20:00 PM
Powerfully beautiful and romantic sonnet....as good as I have ever written or read. I know a little more about where Peter gets his inspiration..... Love Ya.... Jake
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Vera Duggan
Date: 8/14/2014 7:30:00 PM
Jake thank you ever so much for that beautiful comment, those were the days, take care my friend.............Vera............
Date: 8/8/2014 3:42:00 PM
Yeah Vera!!!!!!!! This is absolutely wonderful....
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Date: 8/12/2014 1:14:00 AM
Oh Donna how lovely to see you back again, I guessed you were busy with family, thank you for reading my poem. Take care my friend, I will SM you very soon..............Vera.............
Date: 8/6/2014 8:00:00 AM
My friend, congrats on this poem making the best poems list!! I see that others here saw what a fine write it is! BBBBBRAVOOOOOO!!!!!
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Date: 8/6/2014 7:25:00 PM
Ah!!!!!!!!! Robert thank you my friend, can you imagine Peter and I walking hand in hand along the beach, actually we hate the beach, okay to just visit and it is just down the road from us take care my friend..............Vera................
Date: 7/21/2014 1:47:00 AM
beautiful vera... enjoyed... verlena
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Date: 7/21/2014 9:15:00 PM
Verlena thank you so much for the lovely comment and for taking the time to visit my page, take care my friend,..............Vera.............
Date: 7/19/2014 8:22:00 PM
OK Vera. I'm sorry I haven't looked at your poems. I like this one a lot. A pure love of nature is even more intensified when walking hand in hand with the one you love. Very beautiful and heart warming poem, my friend.... Robert.
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Date: 7/19/2014 11:56:00 PM
Thank you so much Robert, I really appreciate you reading my very few poems, I don't write that often and when I do I have to ask Peter for help, I am only in the learning process, yes we have a lot of beach and sand over here to walk on but I don't remember the last time we did it, take care my friend........Vera............
Date: 7/17/2014 7:53:00 PM
Lol! See what I mean! I just commented on my own comment!... Look bellow!!
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Date: 7/18/2014 12:53:00 AM
Silly you, I do the same sometimes and I call it a wrinkly moment LoL.
Date: 7/17/2014 7:22:00 PM
Love the mood of this love poem, Vera!!.. Well penned my friend. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/17/2014 7:48:00 PM
Vera, dear you are doing great! I only started writing in may of this year..I have to look up forms. People have been helpful and there is the FAQ page to help with the site. I never thought I would be writing, but I love it!!
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Date: 7/17/2014 7:44:00 PM
Arlene thank you so much for taking the time to read my poems, I am not very good at it yet, Peter helps me every now and then, I sometimes have to refer to him when I get stuck, but I am learning and I find it hard to think of subjects to write about but I get there in the end, take care my friend...........Vera...........
Date: 7/17/2014 2:09:00 PM
Such a beautiful and loving write Vera. The perfect postcard for what marriage should be. May God continue to bless you and your family abundantly. And thank you for your kind comment.
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Date: 7/17/2014 7:41:00 PM
thank you so much Vincent for your lovely comment and you are welcome to my comments, I don't seem to have the time to comment much, I just can't sit at the computer all day like Peter does, I have other chores to do but I do love your poetry, take care my friend............Vera............
Date: 7/17/2014 3:29:00 AM
So very romantic...hand in hand...through the sand! No need to be on the beach to do that...just close your eyes and picture it, feel the sand, hear the lapping water, smell the salty breeze.......!! See what happens...now I'm intruding:) Well done, Vera! // paul
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Date: 7/17/2014 7:38:00 PM
Paul you can intrude as much as you like, I love the feel of sand between my toes but I am afraid we don't very often visit the beach even though it s just down the road, thank you so much for the lovely comment, take care my friend regards to the wife..........Vera.........
Date: 7/16/2014 11:10:00 PM
Vera this is a truly great write! So smooth and full of heartfelt emotion! I am adding this to my fav list and I thank you for it!! Keep this up ad you will make Peter have to step up his game! lol
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Date: 7/17/2014 1:17:00 AM
Thank you so much Robert, mind you I don't remember the last time we even went down to the beach, especially on the sand, mind you we have just come home from the quay which is on the beach, but too cold to walk on the beach, love to all and take care................Vera...........
Date: 7/15/2014 7:24:00 AM
This marvelous write triggered personal memories for me, Vera. Your sincerity erupts from the page ... Jack C
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Date: 7/16/2014 12:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Jack, we do have plenty of sand to stroll on, but too old now, thanks for reading, take care...........Vera..........
Date: 7/14/2014 9:10:00 PM
A beautiful romantic rhyme with such great flow..I loved it Vera. I'm guessing it's you and Peter walking the pure white sand :) Ana
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Date: 7/15/2014 1:41:00 AM
Ana thank you so much for the lovely comment, yes it is Peter and I walking along a beach, not at the moment though too damn cold, but we will be as soon as summer starts, can't wait, take care .............Vera.............
Date: 7/10/2014 10:31:00 PM
This is so nice Vera; I can just picture you and Peter walking on the sand Watching the ocean waves. Thanks for sharing.. Lucilla
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Date: 7/11/2014 5:27:00 AM
Lucilla thank you so much for the lovely comment, we used to walk along the sand but not any more, we sit in the car and watch the ocean waves.Lol. Take care my dear friend.......Vera.......... Will soup mail you in the next day or so.....
Date: 7/10/2014 6:49:00 PM
AWW warm and fuzzy I love it!! You are awesome Vera :)
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Vera Duggan
Date: 7/11/2014 5:28:00 AM
Thank you so much Casarah, a warm and fuzzy to you..take care my friend...........Vera..........
Date: 7/10/2014 5:23:00 PM
Ahh romance I remember it well such a beautiful poem. I'm a born cursed romantic myself. well done. take care, best wishes. Pete.
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Vera Duggan
Date: 7/11/2014 5:30:00 AM
Ahh! Peter thank you so much for the lovely comment, yes isn't romance a wonderful thing even when you get as old as us, take care my friend............Vera...........
Date: 7/10/2014 10:09:00 AM
Dear Vera: Very nicely said. Peter is a lucky man. All the best to you two. Leon
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Vera Duggan
Date: 7/11/2014 5:35:00 AM
Oh! thank you so very much Leon, we are both very lucky to have each other as I am sure you and your other half are, take care my friend..........Vera.............
Date: 7/10/2014 8:55:00 AM
simply stunning Vera you have come so far is such a short time - your creativity inspires me:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 7/11/2014 5:41:00 AM
Thank you so much Jan my friend, if it wasn't for you, Peter and Donna I wouldn't be doing this, it is still hard for me at times but I get there in the end.....Take care my friend........Vera.............
Date: 7/10/2014 5:39:00 AM
What a beautiful love sonnet.... Simply delightful..... Flowing ever so gentle like the wind....This is your best piece so far and I am making it a favorite of mine.....hugs Tim
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Date: 7/11/2014 5:25:00 AM
Why thank you Tim, lovely comment, I didn't even know it was a sonnet, I really appreciate you reading, take care my friend.............Vera.......