As We Unite In a Knot

As we enter into marriage let me tell you,
I am from Mars; You are from Venus; it's so true.
Reciprocity in dealings should be new view.

Doubts and contradictions rise, sure, in loving hearts,
Doesn't the full moon seem a bit darker in some parts?
Let's be truly engraved into love's cautious arts.

Is walking hand in hand to malls and meals enough?
Paths of Himalayas, though seem fancy, aren't rough?
Can I hold you and you hold me in times so tough?

A man-woman bond is like a hand-cart, I feel.
Each one needs to lend our hands, full of zest and zeal.
Stopping and pushing must be sure part of the deal.

Realizing these, may we unite in a knot?
True knot should not by infidelity bring blot.
May God be our polestar and lighthouse of our yacht!



26 July 2021
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Kauffman Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 11:52 AM
How lovely Chris - a beautiful wedding prayer filled with hopes for the fuutre bathed in the light of transparent reality. Congratulations and blessings!
Agustin Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 3:26 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... genuine love at work. God bless you.
Alex Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 8:18 AM
Thank you very much.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 8:55 PM
This is what it is all about "Can I hold you and you hold me in times so tough?" Gorgeous job my friend!
Alex Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 6:19 AM
Thank you very much.
Buhagiar Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 12:43 PM
Beautiful rhyme. An excellent poem.
Alex Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 8:53 PM
Thank you very much.
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