As the Sun Sets

as the sun peaks....

   over the horizon...

   she shows me her radiant smile....
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Strand Avatar
September 16, 2008 at 11:53 PM
A lovely picture D-nyce.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome & thoughtful comments on my poetry
Foulk Avatar
September 9, 2008 at 10:01 PM
a very peaceful and warm poem. Deneen I tried to find that poem you told me about, "Men Of Poetrysoup, where is it located and how do I find it?
Winter Avatar
August 29, 2008 at 8:17 AM
Simply gorgeous haiku. Love, Shar
Reynolds Avatar
August 29, 2008 at 3:41 AM
yes, ans what a smile it is! A perfect image, well done haiku, D! Love Kristin
Richards Avatar
August 28, 2008 at 6:35 PM
Another beautiful image...the sun smiling! Nice!! Carrie
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