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The Moon shone brightly, coated in silver. Enabling objects to be freshly alive. Build our life on the Moons cycles and shiver. Having one Moon implies we must observe. Kindly advise if I can stay awake all night. Stop the gentle shine in my spirit, O Moon. At night, the moonrise is an aesthetic sight. A window with the words shown for a boon. With my eyes, I raise my gaze to the sky. Fly Me to the Moon to play with the stars too. The Moon was obscured by the trees nearby.  The moonlit curtain was the sole source of view. I'll be with the stars if I miss the Moon. A moon is watching over the orchard. The crescent is a moon in progress soon. Have this stressed-out lady on her period. The Moon is a source of inspiration for lovers. When the lights are shut off, it emits a gentle glow. She nourishes her kids in the way a mother utters. All traces of dread settled within vanish, though. My love, don't sleep; I depict myself as a butterfly. Our scars were fashioned into an ornament. It acquired the potential to be sensitive to the sky. With your glossy lips, you are a lovely fortunate. The Moon has been brilliantly designed. Cannot hide the sun, Moon, and truth. The desire is born out of the human mind. As I view the moon, I praise God for my soothe.
Written: August 4, 2021 Is The Moon Male or Female or Both Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 8/15/2021 1:35:00 AM
Wow! Beautiful! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/11/2021 1:32:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you.
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Date: 8/10/2021 12:24:00 PM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful story/write about the Moon. Love your line "The Moon has been brilliantly designed." It has been. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 8/10/2021 10:26:00 AM
Great Work. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/10/2021 10:40:00 AM
Thanks, Alex, appreciate it.
Date: 8/6/2021 3:25:00 AM
Lovely ode to the moon..Good luck in the contest Lasaad..Delice
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Date: 8/5/2021 8:11:00 AM
WoW! Lasaad, I found your “ moon” poem to be appreciative, descriptive, and romantic. Nice touch with the “ fly me to the moon.” mention. I liked this a lot. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/5/2021 8:31:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Alexis, for your motivating and uplifting comment, it’s so much appreciated, I’m happy you like it. Take care and blessings with warm hugs
Date: 8/5/2021 5:16:00 AM
Your poem shines with the moon, Lasaad.
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Date: 8/5/2021 7:58:00 AM
Thanks Vijay appreciate your nice comment. Take care my friend
Date: 8/5/2021 2:50:00 AM
- A really beautiful poem about the moon, Las ... "fly me to the moon to play with the stars too" ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/5/2021 7:59:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise your comment is so motivating, blessings and hugs
Date: 8/4/2021 11:26:00 PM
Splendid poem on the moon. It attracts all sorts of poems. Well done.
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Date: 8/5/2021 8:00:00 AM
Thanks Victor it’s so much appreciated. Have a blessed day
Date: 8/4/2021 8:03:00 PM
A magical creation, taking one on a beautiful journey through a moonlit night. Best wishes for the contest, my friend, Evelyn :)
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Date: 8/4/2021 8:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear Evelyn. Your kind words are so motivating and uplifting to me. I'm glad you like this poem. Have a wonderful evening.
Date: 8/4/2021 6:45:00 PM
Beautiful write on moon. All the best for contest
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Date: 8/4/2021 6:57:00 PM
Thanks, Rama, your words are so motivating

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