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As the Last Petal Falls

softly it lingers, a breath in the air, a whisper of love, too fragile to bear-- the rose in your hands, once burning bright, fades in the hush of the fading light a crimson promise, a vow once made, wilting now in autumn’s shade-- yet love is not lost in petals torn, but in the echoes where hearts were worn so let it drift, let time erase the touch of silk, the sweet embrace-- for love remains, though seasons call, even as the last petal falls

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Date: 5/31/2025 6:32:00 PM
So delicate- your words are resilient but have a certain sensitive nature, I loved this
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