As the Days Pass

As the days pass
I grow old and old
Some new things i learn
Precious than gold 

As the days pass
I see the world more 
And learn what's life about 
Which i never knew before

As the days pass 
My life gets more short
The time that has passed
I miss it alot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 11:18 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 12:14 AM
marium khan, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 11:14 PM
MARIUM, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **
Cavanaugh Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 7:04 AM
Welcome to the soup. Lovely poem. Hope your days are filled with sunshine and the love of friends and family.
Tsiluma Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 10:29 PM
Lovely poem Marium! The passage of time brings with it wisdom, memories and at times regret. Nicely done this!
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October 23, 2012 at 9:13 PM
indeed, this life is but a vapor , love your work,welcome to poetry soup
Brown Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 5:38 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Marium. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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