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As the Days Pass

As the days pass I grow old and old Some new things i learn Precious than gold As the days pass I see the world more And learn what's life about Which i never knew before As the days pass My life gets more short The time that has passed I miss it alot

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/17/2016 12:14:00 AM

marium khan, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/14/2016 11:14:00 PM

MARIUM, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 11/11/2012 7:04:00 AM

Welcome to the soup. Lovely poem. Hope your days are filled with sunshine and the love of friends and family.

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 10/30/2012 10:29:00 PM

Lovely poem Marium! The passage of time brings with it wisdom, memories and at times regret. Nicely done this!

Stephan McBride

Date: 10/23/2012 9:13:00 PM

indeed, this life is but a vapor , love your work,welcome to poetry soup

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/23/2012 5:38:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Marium. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol