As the Day Ends

You look back and think Have I done what needs to be No remorse, of course
By: Misty Leccese © November 17, 2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2010 at 6:56 PM
This is a nice thought to do this every day, look back with no remorse!
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November 18, 2010 at 4:05 AM
You said it best with the last line, nice work Misty...Raul
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November 17, 2010 at 9:41 AM
deep write,,, enjoyed,..p.d.
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November 17, 2010 at 8:16 AM
As one who is always looking back and rethinking the choices made, I really enjoyed this terrific senryu, Misty. Enjoyed the clever rhyme in the last line as well. Love, Carolyn
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