As She Wrote It.

Your mind is racing.
you dont know why.
Everything was going good,
Untill she came by.
Its hard on her
as it is on you
Sometimes things seem easier,
If we said we were through.
I cant let you go,
No matter how hard i try.
Sometimes i wonder
If it will end up you and I.
I hope indeed that this is true,
For the simple fact
That i think i love you...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Agustin Avatar
September 2, 2026 at 2:47 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 26, 2016 at 12:58 AM
Blake, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
August 8, 2015 at 1:05 AM
Blake, Enjoyed reading your poem. **SKAT**
Brown Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 7:32 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning Blake. I will be back after the New Year to read more of your poetry. Wishing you a very Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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December 21, 2010 at 5:23 AM
Simple and to the point. I dig this. I hope the recipient heard & felt this. Well done.
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