As She Walks Away

Walked into the house found a letter next to the door. 
She said she's tired and don't know what to do anymore.
Thinking to myself this is too much for me.
Why can't she sit and wait a little bit longer for it too be.
It isn't that hard to do.
But then again I'm still confused too.
Conversations, were always in them.
Don't know what to believe.
Rumors come and go as we see.
She says she's ready to give up on me.
She has told me a thousand times or more,
Tht she can't wait forever for me too decide.
But something in me knows,she won't leave my side.
All her silent cries i ignored,
So I wouldn't have to feel them as she did.
God knows I don't mean too hurt her.
What about them hard days on me.
I don't think about hers though,
Or what's on her mind.
I sit here thinking if she will come back too me after this night.
I hated it when she slammed the door.
As she walked away.
My heart cracked into half,
I realized I let the best thing go.
I hope and pray she will come back too me .
I hope she won't forget about me .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 3/3/2011 7:16:00 AM
I am enjoying reading the many diverse poems written by the many wonderful poets writing and sharing here at PoetrySoup today. I am happy that yours was among the ones I had the pleasure to read Karlicea. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2011 4:36:00 PM
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