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As She Sleeps

has i look at her deep in to her state of sleep i creep slowly at her side as i bend down to sneak a peek my mouth drools with thought of her taste i think is it me cause i am a beast or could it be i want a feast slowly i open wide show my fangs from inside slowly i place my face near as she wakes scared of my face graces my hands with hard grip i tip her neck as i bite her nip of her neck and mumble only one sec she moaned with desire her blood burned like fire removing my face she cry for my embrace i touch her soul with only one taste oh what a powerful embrace

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Date: 1/14/2010 7:29:00 AM
ok, the spelling is killing me, do spell check, please,,, But its good stuff, real emotions... reread your work every once in a while, it will teach YOU something about yourself. This will help you teach others what you learn.
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